lilith by nikki marmey i like some of the ideas in this, but not the the writing, bad execution. i abhor how it mixes biblical speak and modern phrasing. itâs so corny and tacky. god telling adam âand if the woman told you to jumpith off a cliff would you?â made me want to gauge my eyes out. i hate how she made eve stupid. you guys know i hated that about paradise lost too. i hate how lilith calls her stupid and ugly. my lilith is a girls girl. she would never do that, not in writing at least, maybe just in her head by accident. i get that she needs to be submissive to foil lilith, but i donât think you need to be an idiot to be submissive. writing peter as a villain is such a slay. whoever wrote the gospel of john would love the way heâs portrayed in this. it definitely soothed some religious trauma. 4/10 Read more